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Valentine Acrostic   [E]
A Valentine 's Day Acrostic Poem
by KingsSideCastle
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Sun*Greetings KingsSideCastle. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" .


*Heartv* Wow! This is such a romantic acrostic for Valentine's Day. Your details on loving elements of relationship are well conceived and vivid.

*Hug* The Acrostic format is effectively created with theme appropriate words for each first letter. Good for you on the N and V : I find they can be tricky! *Thumbsup* I like the old word "Vintage" as it is evocative of a long love.

*Heart* I was impressed too that you used rhyme as an element to the form. That can be a challenge as I too have done it! Your periods on every line made each point equal time and emphasis. The images of embers and glances and whimsy are lovely descriptions. As I read aloud I noticed some lovely sound elements in repeated letters that added to the flow of the work. Good job.

*Hug* I enjoyed reading your poem with its personal voice that draws the reader to remember their own experiences of love. Wonderful creation to celebrate the day. *Star* Thanks for sharing your gift and well crafted acrostic!

Write on in your style!
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