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The Life of T.P.  [18+]
Contest Entry for Personify Writing Contest
by D.L. Robinson
Review of The Life of T.P.  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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The line "Please put my back!" should probably be "Please put me back!" other than that I like this. It strikes a balance between the filthy truth of toilet paper's destiny and an optimistic view on the life of toilet paper I don't feel the slightest bit of resentment from this toilet paper.

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