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Given: Apr 29, 2022 at 3:45pm
Length: 309 Characters |
297 w/o WritingML
Clearly a deep love here. I enjoyed most of the rhymes but the week-weak rhyme seemed a little (pardon the pun) weak to me. I love the love this poem portrays and the lengthening of the separation increases the pain expressed I just hope the poet's pleas are heard and the reunion is swift.
You responded to this review 04/29/2022 @ 6:22pm EDT
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You responded to this review 04/29/2022 @ 6:22pm EDT