Hi AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

This funny little poem called, "Diet Dying Days" of the times either leading up to or in the midst of a strict diet right before Thanksgiving. Oh what a struggle the diet can be, especially when we know that we will consume so much food those days of Bacchus hedonistic dining and consumption.

The struggle is real and the speaker has only one answer to quell and stay the horror of the impending dietary implosion.


Impression: This is definitely written from the perspective of one who has struggled but knows how to live another day to diet. I genuinely enjoyed reading this poem and chuckled at the cleverness of the prose.

What I loved: It was so likeable and succinct...really a fun quick enjoyable read.


What needs work: Nothing in this poem needs improvement.


Final thoughts: You are one who has fought this diet battle and maintained life though you often felt it might defeat you. Funny, keep on writing these poems and I thank you for the opportunity to read and review your writing today.


"Noticing Newbies"  [13+]






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