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Action/Adventure: March 10, 2010 Issue [#3596]

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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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About This Newsletter

Hi! I'm Storm Machine and I'm honored to be your Guest Editor this week.

"Life is either a daring adventure or nothing." Helen Keller


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Letter from the editor

Believability


Three things should always be at the forefront when considering your action/adventure tale: logic, reason, and credibility. Your characters have (probably human) abilities, and your reader is hoping they win at the end of the story.

But there are places where you can lose the readers where they’d otherwise stay. Did John shoot his pistol with eight bullets, when it only holds six? Did Kurt never stop for gas – or anything else – for a several hundred mile car chase in the middle of the night? Did Mandy exhibit unknown acrobatic skills when she jumped out of a seventh story window to land lightly on an awning and flip to the sidewalk when three chapters earlier she tripped on the carpet runner?

If your characters aren’t human, you’ll have to set up their physical and mental abilities and stick to them. For regular people, however, it will require research. How long can a person survive without water? What happens when two cars collide? Can someone swim across the Mississippi River with the snow melt and ice floes?

I know Hollywood makes their own rules; my husband and I sometimes look at each other and shake our heads because it wouldn’t happen that way. It has brought up major engineering/physics/other discussions. When we’re famous and get stories made into movies, I’m sure we’ll let Hollywood use their fake science all they like, but as we write it, it had better be real.

It better be consistent, too. The last thing you want is to have letters from all your readers saying how in Book 1 Chapter 15 Zara’s thigh was punctured with a pitchfork, but Book 2 Chapter 6 the other character talked about her shoulder injury.

Good luck and happy writing!


Editor's Picks

Chapter 1- A Cure for Immortality  (13+)
A wanted outlaw finds herself face-to-face with an alien believed to be extinct.
#1175396 by Sara King

 
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The Chinese Box  (13+)
The surprising things you can find at a thrift store....
#648327 by W.D.Wilcox

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 Creatures under the Mountain  (18+)
Bills camping trip goes horribly awry when he catches something unexpected in the lake
#692970 by MadMan at Large

Dancing Eagle Feathers  (ASR)
1st Place Short Story in Literary Magazine in 2000 by Texas Intercollegiate Press Assoc.
#550279 by wildbill

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 The Darkness  (18+)
Something is mutilating the people that live in this small town.
#677796 by John Littner

 Rescued from Drowning  (13+)
Man in the water. Dog in the water.
#123197 by Bandit's Mama

 
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