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Noticing Newbies: December 25, 2012 Issue [#5430]

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 This week: Writers on Writing
  Edited by: Brooklyn
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter


The Noticing Newbies Newsletter's goal is to make the newer members feel welcome and encourage them with useful information and/or links to make navigating Writing.com easier. Writing.com members of all ages and even veteran members can find useful information here. If you have specific questions, try visiting "Writing.Com 101 and/or "Noticing Newbies.

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Letter from the editor


"It took me fifteen years to discover I had no talent for writing, but I couldn't give it up because by that time I was too famous." - Robert Benchley


Writers on Writing


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I've heard many authors inquire about "How To Make Your Writing Stand Out. Well, one might say, practice makes perfect but some clearly worded "Writing and Reviewing Advice can be priceless.

"Writing Skills can be enhanced by learning many things from other talented authors. There are many items available here that share advice on valuable topics such as "Story Structure, "Realistic Dialogue and many other "Items on the Craft of Writing

By searching the genre "Writing", "How-To Advice" and even "Non-Fiction" in general, you can find wonderful "Writing Tips And Advice Corner and maybe you can gather enough information to write your own "Invalid Item.

If you're looking for somewhere to ask specific questions that even a "Grammarama guru might not be able to answer, you can always visit the forums available such as "Invalid Item and I'm sure some fellow writers will offer you some advice.

Perhaps you're looking for information specifically targeted at "Invalid Item? That's a great thing to learn more about because "Reviewing is a very important part of this site and it can teach you so much. It's important to establish the "Guidelines for Reviewing that fit your style because learning about reviewing with also teach you "Invalid Item. I remember being a new members and "Giving Your First Review can be a little scary, but it can also be a very rewarding activity. Remember, "Responding to Reviews is also important.


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Editor's Picks


This month, I'm featuring work from authors that sent in feedback to my last newsletter and also some that have shown they are working hard on their stories. Also, all of my featured authors have filled out either their bio block or biography page. *Smile*

 
The Life of Silver  [E]
How would you describe the color of your life and do you know your place in the rainbow?
by Angels in my Ear

Excerpt:
I am the the shine in the ink; the gloss in the paint; I am the glare in your eyes. I am the gift that is prized and adored, and the song of the dancing chimes. I am the gleam on the snow in the calming luster of the morning after the storm. I am a trick of the light through the filter of the sorrowful sky and the first drops of rain on your window. I am the crest of a wave on a moonlit night and the tear in your baby's eye.


~*Star*~

 Aqcuiescence for absolution  [13+]
Love gone awry
by A. D. Williams

Excerpt:
Vengeful eyes watch
Laughing, reaping
Taking in deserved and pointed pains
Secret weaknesses gleaned
He turns the knife on her
Tracing old scars and still bleeding wounds
With learned accuracy
Knowing her fears, her pains
He's watched her unravel


~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
I turned around. I should have known better, I shouldn't have turned around. She would have remained a dream, a glimpse of the pale moon amidst the dark cloud. I shouldn't have turned, because how can a person hope to catch the moon.

She looked exactly as I thought she would look, uncomfortable. Another unfortunate soul dragged to this youthful alter to the god of desperation. I could rhapsodize about her beauty, describe her every feature from head to toe in rhyme even, but u wouldn't still understand. It would be like trying to explain the first sip of ice cold cola on a scorching day.


~*Star*~

 Apocalypse Come  [ASR]
A student is teased by his classmates for believing in the apocalypse. But is he right?
by Tom Holmes

Excerpt:
I knew they'd mock me. Anna and her whining sneer, Adam's condescending baby talk. It would all be directed at me. I walked down the brightly lit hall and tried to ignore the stares of my classmates at their lockers. Someone walking by hit me in the back, just enough to make me stumble.

"Hey, crazy. I thought the world was supposed to end today," Adam's voice rang as predicted. Well, it was supposed to end today. I would have welcomed it. I was sick of the world, or at least my world. Could you blame me?


~*Star*~

 Zero Tolerance:15 Predators and Prey  [ASR]
The first draft of the latest chapter of my book. Please let me know what you think.
by Saicho

Excerpt:
The taxi ride to the hospital was short and uneventful. I left Lucy's flat maybe fifteen minutes ago to come down and see Gary. I need to put my mind at ease; I need to know that this wasn't because of me. I suppose I am hoping that the completely innocent lad is actually a renowned gangster in his spare time and that is why he has ended up like this. Maybe I am hoping for too much. I almost dread seeing him; it won't be a nice picture. Stepping out of the taxi at the main entrance to the hospital I scan the area looking for some kind of direction. I know he is in intensive care but that could be in any one of the many buildings that now surrounds me. I decided to do the not very "guy" thing and ask directions at the reception desk.


~*Star*~

 Sherlock Holmes and the Dead Beatle  [13+]
Sherlock Holmes faces his most baffling case.
by William Hrdina

Excerpt:
"An interesting case, I must admit." Holmes declared, looking at his guest for the first time in five minutes.
"Indeed. So then, you will take my case?" Asked Brian Epstein.
He looked exhausted. A tentative hope played on his face.
"I think I will, yes. I've always been interested in scarabaeus."
Off to the side, leaning fashionably on a Victorian chest, Watson did his level best not to roll his eyes. Poor Sherlock, he saw plausibility in even the most absurd of claims- and still found a way to be pretentious about it.
Sherlock saw the look of incredulity on his old friend's face and felt similarly sorry for Watson- whose lack of imagination had been a millstone around his neck for well over a decade.


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 Letters from across the street  [13+]
First chapter from a novel I have been working on - Letters from across the street
by Rohin

Excerpt:
Dear Stranger,

To be, or not to be: that is the question.

Hamlet contemplates at the beginning of Act III Scene I of Hamlet, a tragic play written by Shakespeare. I am neither Hamlet nor do I intend to break into a long monologue on life and death. I am just an ordinary person, living across the street, who finds himself in a similar dilemma.

However, the question for me is different.

To write, or not to write to you.


~*Star*~

 Tattoos  [E]
A short essay about tattoos
by squirls

Excerpt:
Tattoos seem to have came into the mainstream over the past couple of years. There are still people who feel that they only fit a couple of types of people, but when you look around it seems all types of people have some sort of body art. Then there is the fact that tattoo parlors are popping up everywhere.

My concern is not that people are getting tattoos, but at what age should this actually happen without regret. The legal aspect does not need to be changed and I am not advocating for that. I feel that with maturity there would be less tattoo regret. Unfortunately, not everyone matures at the same rate, some never do. Some people do not understand the concept of permanent art work and the fact that their life may change.


~*Star*~



 
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I received some wonderful feedback to my last newsletter [#5388] "Edit Your Way to Success and I'm proud to share it with you.

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Loved reading about what makes a Scene. Thank you, I will copy it for reference.



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Thank you for featuring an excerpt from my young adult fiction piece, 'Crystal River'. I am still mustering up the courage to structure a full length novel for an adult audience, but receiving positive reviews is very encouraging and has an immeasurable affect on my self-confidence. The newsletters are helpful, practical and thought provoking. Kudos.

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