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Rated: E · Folder · Other · #1075385
222 gps per review. Newer poems needing reviews. Less than 100 views.
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Newer poems (or poems renewed!) needed a folder of their own to unclutter this closet! And 222 gps is your reward for helping me with cleaning it out.

After appearing in my blog "L'aura del Campo [13+] this is where my poems come to be read, reviewed and rated. These are the waters in which they sink or swim. You, the reader help decide their future. I am merely the midwife that gave them birth.

Newest (August 15 short poems from recent blog entries):

"What the waves knew

Still no comments:

"Drugs sold here
"Sorting task

Another three poems that have been read the least to date:
"Canvas of a May day
"Flood of '93

Poems that have been reviewed at least 10 times and will be moved elsewhere (and gps reduced), usually when they have received 15 reviews and 50 views (due to the vagaries of the WDC system, these are still here, alas):
"Palette of Pastels
"Mauve Mavis
"Alps (12/81)
"Susan-of-the-waves (12/46)
"Violets (13/49)
"Wheat penny
"Song of an Age
"Flight of the unwanted son (12/58)

The one that readers seem to enjoy the most if you have time for only one:
"Wheat penny

Thank-you to all my readers. I usually won't edit or respond to reviews until a poem gets ten reviews. Then I get to mull over whether to burn or bury them! *Smirk*
Portfolio -> Room 222 - New Poems
    Rated: ASR · Arts · #1595287
    We melt into pastels, ooze onto wove-tight canvas, dry in the vaults of minds,
    Rated: 18+ · Career · #1537818
    He'll always have jobs as long as there're sidewalks to work.
    Rated: 13+ · Young Adult · #1533259
    Certain dreams I wish I could remember/ certain nightmares I wish I had forgot
    Rated: E · Community · #1518306
    We bury the burdens of these treacherous times/ We lay them down, no longer ours.
    Rated: 13+ · Animal · #1513831
    we left them then/ cold, naked in the rain/ knowing only time would cleanse the stench
    Rated: 18+ · Other · #1484386
    93 short poems/prose written May 13, 2005 and being revised.
    Rated: 13+ · Community · #1403095
    Part of the Neverending poem. The fallen stay while the world moves on with laughter.
    Rated: 13+ · Travel · #1402322
    haibun: paved paradise / seen from the bus: / miles of human scrap
    Rated: E · Community · #1375904
    the house will gleam anew,/ jaundiced clapboards covered by a sea of blue.
    Rated: ASR · Family · #1375899
    I will never create such beauty,/ bring forth the radiance of your two suns.
    Rated: 18+ · Religious · #1375892
    saw mirrored deep in our bird-poop eyes,/ the awesome Face of God.
    Rated: E · Animal · #1375887
    The old grey siamese / chases the mouse that chomps on the cheese,
    Rated: E · Family · #1375883
    In her hand circling over her heart; in her reach, an attempt to touch this child:
    Rated: 13+ · Relationship · #1361427
    She sings of longing for her missing mate;/ she'll sing long past his passing.
    Rated: 13+ · Family · #1359203
    with frozen icicle hands,/ and see-through eyes, a parent/ transparent as crisp blue sky,
    Rated: 13+ · Personal · #1358716
    Zach fled Helena to be born again/ in black and silver piercings,
    Rated: 13+ · Career · #1358712
    A wisp of smoke flutters against the sky/ as an orange flicker of flame
    Rated: 18+ · Other · #1358711
    Luscious,/ soft-centered,/ maroon and grizzly,
    Rated: 13+ · Personal · #1358323
    ... waves waves waves .../ splash over my thighs,/ slow to ripples/ that caress my chest.
    Rated: 18+ · Gothic · #1316727
    Pickled puppies in a row of mason jars adorn her shelves. Her gnomes know nothing.
    Rated: 18+ · Relationship · #1316713
    222 gps. Voices that once annoyed me ceased to call ...
    Rated: 13+ · Nature · #1306259
    Sweet-sour reminder from a month / that bites.
    Rated: 13+ · Tragedy · #1306257
    rubies drying in the bloody sun / lit sand. A cinquain.
    Rated: 13+ · Psychology · #1300088
    Surrounded by the lies that let us live, // Which one's mine? / Which one's yours?
    Rated: 18+ · Crime/Gangster · #1300074
    An invitation to buy, / a warning to leave, / addicted to dawn.
    Rated: ASR · Nature · #1273600
    Here where lawns / defend themselves with chiggers / my tired eyelids flutter
    Rated: 18+ · Nature · #1273156
    White frosted chocolate / mud flows like water / under the bridge / to visit Kansas City,
    Rated: 13+ · Other · #1257684
    A word slides across the surface, /a slice of venomous brush
    Rated: E · Holiday · #1255793
    heel-ball, heel-ball, /their snap of fingers /twirling in the shadows /cast by sun.
    Rated: ASR · Nature · #1252037
    Along the lanes: charcoal slated roofs, / black timbers, puce pocked stone,
    Rated: 13+ · Friendship · #1248994
    softening to your calming touch / as grey becomes a pussywillow fog,
    Rated: 13+ · Emotional · #1246158
    he soared beyond the roof-lines of constraint / and veered towards mountains' aspiration
    Rated: ASR · Psychology · #1243432
    And the waves wash over wants, / sort out the memories by size and taste
    Rated: ASR · Philosophy · #1237152
    He who loves from his heart dies too, but its beat holds the song of an Age.
    Rated: 13+ · Relationship · #1230081
    "we pose a pietà: you the designated Madonna, me?" Amaranthus caudatus
    Rated: 13+ · Other · #1230020
    Heroic poem in vocative voice. "O Spear, son of Spear and son the Oak stream's daughter"
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