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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Dark · #1447064
My poem from my creative writing class.
Blasphemous Act

I murdered
Your brother

Forgive me

He filled my dark heart
With HATRED

His loud voice
BOOMING
Through my ears

His fake smiles
Infuriated me
From the start

It burns my cold heart
To a TOASTED black coal

Remember
My eyes darkening
From the crime that would screech
Through the streets

Below the full moon
With blankets of snow
Inhabiting the ground

That night so peaceful
Eerie with the silence
That even you
Felt that a bad omen
Was approaching
From the quiet night

Remember
The sin I committed

Forgive me
I couldn’t help
S l i c i n g him
To s h r e d s

It was so ADDICTING

In the dead night
Of winter
When I splattered
A deadly substance
On the pure snow
I tainted it
With his wretched blood

Remember
His blood
O o z i n g out

His skin rotting
His human heartbeat
Coming to a HALT

Remember
The knife that
Reached his s l o w l y beating
Heart

His eyes
Closing
In slow m o t i o n
The future
He’ll never
See

I raised the blood stained razor
To my smirking lips
Licking the crimson liquid

Forgive me

For
My joyful CRIME
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