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Hey just wonderin if some1 would please read through this story and comment their thoughts
  CHAPTER 1
About 16 years ago, my Mother gave birth to an outcast.
Ever since I was young I never fitted in with the other gilrs, they would comb their dolls hair while I would set it alight,
I never liked wearing dresses or skirts and staying up all night talking about which guy i liked in school and which one I would go to the prom with,
and while they dreamed of becoming models, I dreamed of becoming the supernatural, something that most likely only existed in my mind.
Thats how I became someone that was not be wanted,
another person that the world was going to tell that they were nothing and never will acheive to be anything else but nothing.
Well the world’s words are correct because here I am another little nobody,
and when i become a woman ill still be nothing,
that birth 16 years ago,
was given to me,
Jasmine.

The 3:00 pm finish bell for school just rang,
and like usuall i was the first to leave,
i grabbed my black do-it-yourself hand fashioned bag,
and went down the dull gray school halls of Blackwood High.
I tried to get home as fast as i could so i went down S.Pennsylvania Avenue,
But before i could get home i was caught by Vanessa, the school “bully”,
she was tall, dark and mean, she looked almost like a man, with steriod grown muscels, and her face looked like a dropped pie,
she rode an old motorcycle; that looked younger than she did; even though she was underage,
and she scared even grown man, and now she was after me.

I ran, and ran, but she caught me. She told me get on, and so i would not get hurt i did what she said to,
we went down a street i had never been down before,
we arrived to a old abandonded building, one that should have been demolished a century or two ago,
but the government never really cared, or never had gotten to it.
There was other people there, people who were not in our grade let alone our school,
they looked like they were college students, but not one of them said a word,
could they even speake at all, and then one of them finally said something.
It was in a mumbled, low and gruntal voice, but by the way he had said it,
it was perfectly clear, the time for fun and games were over,
they had enough of playing around with their prey,
and they were ready to do something i did not even know was humanly possible,
they were flying. Flying in circles around me,
their eyes had changed from a normal coloured iris,
to a black circle, so that the pupils were not visable,
before when i had seen Vanessa i was scared,
but now i was petrified,
they whispered to each other, and hissed at me, and two of their top-front teeth, had grown to a point.

Is it possible for vampires to exist?
no it couldn’t be possible, they only existed in ghost stories or very old legdens
but it might be possible, they were flying right in front of my eyes,
and their teeth were sharp to the point like a vampire,
this could not be real, it must be a dream.
I told myself to close my eyes, and ill wake up and see that this is all a dream.
But before i could, Vanessa grabbed me, and her and her team of “bullies” took me on one of their flying trips,
they took me out on the street, but not just on the street; they took me 50 feet off the ground, and then she let me go,
she dropped me out on the street. And the next thing i knew i found myself in the hospital,
asking if anyone knew me, but they all ignored me,
why would they all ignore me? were they given orders to?
i wanted to know what had happen to me,
but no-one would tell me,
no-one was even here to come and see if i was okay,
yeah my pearents were in South East Asia,
but still no-one?





  CHAPTER 2
“How did I get here?” All i remember was being in a hospital when Dr.Rinsdale showed up.
I was dying,
almost completely gone,
Dr.Rinsdale has being trying to explain the techniqual language of ‘the doctor’,
he said I had some problem with my blood cells, porphyria.
He said he had never seen it this bad before, I had never seen it before,
but I knew I was different,
I knew I was not the same any more,
that everything I knew in my life, had changed.
Dr. Rinsdale, insisted that i should rest, and the his insistant seemed to agree,
I protested that it was not needed, but they left me to rest,
I didnt feel tired, i didnt feel sick, I fealt strong.
I reached for the mirror on the beside table, when I looked I saw that my skin had changed from a mediterranean tan,
to a pale white, almost ghost-like.
So as they had insisted I tried to rest, I tried to close my eyes and sleep but I couldnt,
I opened the bedside table’s draw to get my ipod,
but I found a folder instead,
it said my parents had died on a trip back home from South East Asia,
it also said that Dr.Rinsdale was now my adoptive father,
and that I would be moving to New York.
I knew nothing about New York, except for what I read in books,
and what I had seen in the cinema’s,
I had so many questions that I wanted answered,
but there was only one person who could answer my questions, Dr.Rinsdale.
How was it that my life had such a major turn-around?
why did he pick me, out of all the other people around me?
He knew something about me, something that i might not even know about myself,
and if anyone could tell me the ’secret’, that is me,
that Dr.Rinsdale is hiding from me,
it was him, him alone, and I was ready to find-out the truth.
I just had to get out of here first, leave my past life behind, and prepare myself for the next one.
I was having a craving, it was stirring up inside of me, I could hear voice’s but no one was speaking.
What was going on, that smell, I couldn’t resist it, it was strong, like a drug, equiping me, stirring me,
pulling me towards it, a smell I did not know, it was calling me, it was hard to resist a smell so beautiful,
but I had to resist, it wasnt a good smell, it wasnt a bad smell, but it called me, like a deer calling the lion.

As i followed it, I heard and Saw Dr. Rinsdale talking to a group of people.
“What did you want me to do let her die, i found her with her head cracked open,
she dropped fifty feet, you would have done the same thing, so dont accuse me for saving her life” Dr. Rinsdale was firm in his words but how did he know these people.
“Yeah you could have let her die, but no you wanted to create another one of us, another monster,
You know how dangerous she’s become know, dont expect me to look after her, she was your choice to save,
and i wont be responsible if she creates an uproar for our family, father” The Boy’s words was just as strong as his fathers,
but that now meant that he was now my brother. I needed to run back to my room, before Dr. Rinsdale notice’s i have left it in the first place.
Dr.Rinsdale returned, and insisted that we had to leave, that we had outstood our welcome,
and that it was urgent that we left right then and there. But it was just us that left, the boy i had seen did not leave with us, and i did not see him anywhere in the hospital when we left.
I started asking my question, however he said that the questions would have to wait. That he would answer them, once we were alone.

First we went to Pheonix before we returned to my new home.
Pheonix was a place of a beautiful nature, a place were beautiful, wonderful, yet strange things were answered,
my questions were to be answered then and there.
First of all I asked him what “cutaneous porphyria” was, he tried to explain it in a language that I could understand,
he said it was a blood cell disease and that it primarly affected the skin, and caused the teeth in the gums to grow to a point.
He was right about the affects to the skin, especially with my tan dissappering, but the thing about the teeth,
I had not had such an experience with it just yet.
He asked me if I had any other questions, so i asked him, why he had choosen me, he became histerical at the question,
he cleared his throat, then answered “I did not pick you my child, I just found you, dying, so I saved you,
there are many things that will need to be explained but I believe you will be able to understand them in time.”
“Now is that all you want to know?” he asked me for the second-time, i had so many more questions but out of all of them,
one question could not wait.

So i asked. “What happened to my parents? How did they die?”, at this his swerv smile, faded away.
“Your parents were killed, by 4 North East Asians, they were travelling along the Silk Road, when it happened,
I dont know why they were killed, but they were. Im sorry” and That was the first time i had seen him so serious,
i could tell he was serious by the look on his face, his soft “painted” brow, was tight and twisted, his swarv smile,
had turn to a tightly squeezed thin line, and his hands were clenched as if he were about to punch something, or someone.

All the other questions would have to wait, and as we walked to the top of the mountin side,
the sun hit his skin,and as it did it shined like diamonds, he showed me what he was and said,
“Like father, like child, you are now, what i have shown you.”

He took me to his holiday house in Pheonix, and introduced me to the rest of the family,
and just like me, his other children were all adopted. There was Raven, Elizabeth, Carmella, and Justin.
Dr.Rinsdale, insisted that i called him, William, and His Wife, My new adoptive mother, Olivia.
My New Family was Just like William, and just like me, and so as all the introductions had all been made,
with this being the bignning of my new family, we caught the first flight out of Pheonix to New York City.







  CHAPTER 3
Last Night Was The Longest Night of My Life,
I did not sleep at all, none of us did,
we were on the flight to New York, and everyone on the plane was alseep except for us,
I wanted to ask questions, but I didnt.
I smelt the smell again, the one I had smelt in the hospital,
again I had that craving, William saw the look in my eyes,
and he knew what was about to happen, it was like esctasy,
my eyes your dilating,
everything was becomeing a blur,
and I fealt a sharp pain in my mouth,
like William had said two of my top-front teeth had grown to a point.

The Rinsdale’s, kept me undercontrol, in the cargo room, so I did not attack anything or anyone.
Things were becoming strange again,
and I started to see things, things not in the cargo room,
things not even of this time.
The Craving was becoming worse,
and there was nothing we could do about it.
All we could do was wish that we could keep it undercontrol, and only time would be able to tell if we could.
William, had created another monster, like his son had said, and now even he was scared.

Justin pulled William aside, and even though things were blurry,
i could still hear them perfectly clear, as if they were still right beside me,
“You see what you have done now father, she’s seeing the future,
she’s going insane, she can smell the boy’s blood,
she’s gonna bite, and when she dose like i said in the hospital father,
our family will have an uproar on our hands.” Justin was now yelling.

“Son, If me and your mother can, keep you and your sister’s undercontroll, we can keep Jasmine under controll as well,
We are Rinsdale’s we are survivors, we are fighters,…” but before William could finish, Justin commeted,
“Thats what im afraid of”. and as he said that, they all realized the reality of the situation on their hands,
They had to keep me undercontroll for 1 more hour, the only question is ‘is it possible to do just that’, they were all thinking the same thing,
we should have stayed in Pheonix just a bitter longer, so that i would be more easily controllable, but with hundreds of thousands of people on board,
and only one calling my name, would it be possible to keep them all safe?

It was just under 30 minuets to New York City, when i had my first glimps into the future,
i saw our family being chased by a boy who had 8 of everything, he was what some might call a slayer.
“S-s-s-slayer” i blurted out, while our whole family was fighting, over the yelling and arguing they, somehow, had all heard me.
They come like the speed of light, to hear what i had to say, so i said it again
“Slayer!” more firmly this time, and they were asking all types of question’s,
‘where?’, ‘who?’, ‘what did they look like?’, so i answered their questions,
“a boy, on the plane, about mine and justin’s age, tanned, tall, and very firm looking, he call’s himself ‘Justice’”
Olivia remembered the one thing they all forgot, because she was the only one who had ever really experienced it, the smell of a slayers blood gave one of us,
the effects i had earlier on in the plane, the dilating pubils, the ecstasy feeling that i had, was caused from the slayers blood,
even though they were all scared, only Olivia was petrified, because only she knew the full meaning of the situation now.
“We gotta get off this plane now William, we cant leave anything up to chance, he’s coming after her,
but if he finds all of us, then we are all doomed.” Olivia was gental, scared, but the tone of her voice was strong, and firm like a dictator.
“Alright everyone you heard you’re mother, we gotta fly. However someone’s gonna have to carry Jasmine, she hasn’t developed her full abilities just yet,
but they are developing fast. Justin i want you to carry her, she need’s your protection, your the strongest out of us, and you’ll be able to protect her angainst the slayer.
“Alright father, but only because we could all get hurt if we dont do this fast. Get on Jasmine, were going for a ride.”
So I got on his back, we jumped out of a whole in the cargo room, it was exciting, it was fast, and he was absolutely charming, sensitive, and protective.
However i told myself to get over it, i was crushing on my own brother, but never had i meet anyone like Justin before, he was the Prince of Darkness,
but he was really nice, for someone so dark. So i just reasted on his back on the long ride home to New York city.
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