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by Ralph
Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Teen · #1531670
this is a short story about a girl who did not listen and gets her self hurt.
There is this girl, her name is Ella, Ella Price, she is 14 yrs old, far to young for a mobile, or a boyfriend.

She thought that was very unfair and demanded that she got one, but by the age of 15, she never did, so she got her own one off of her friend. it was pink,and she loved it. Soon she thought that she should have a boyfriend, so she started going on this website for people to find there true love.

she became a member and meet this guy on there, he said he was just a little bit older than Ella, she believed him, he made her feel so special, One day he said Ella, Should we meet up, Ella thought what a fantastic idea, until he said, come ALONE!

but, she thought she was sure she knew what she was doing, she told her best friend about him. Even she wasn't sure that it was a good idea, and begged her not to go, Ella wouldn't listen at all.

Charlie, Ella's best friend had to tell someone she knew she had too, and so she told her mum, and her mum said, lets phone up and tell her mum not to let her go, so Charlies mum phoned, but it was too late,Ella had already left, her mum started crying as she knew what was going too happen.

Ella walked too where she was going to meet him and sat on the bench, and then this Old man came to her and he sat down and said are you Ella Price, Ella was scared, but then the man said i am Ryan, Ryan's uncle, he is ill, he told me to buy you these flowers and chocolates, do you want to come see him, but he wont be able to walk, come my car is over there, Ella thought nothing of it, and she still felt special as he had gave her chocolates he took her to his Audi r8 and saw her scared eyes and said my name is Matt (it was fake) Matt dolor she thought who would give their name out so she stepped in the car the man said Ryan is just 5 minutes away, and they went off, the smell was bad the smell was like BO she looked on the back seat they was knickers on the floor and there was a condom wrapper she kept her mouth shut he had notice she looked on the back seat, and he said it was his wife's knickers and his condom, he said he was sorry that i saw that!

We arrived at a house, it was dark, she stepped inside and







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