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by EllieJ
Rated: · Other · Romance/Love · #1671658
I started writing this story and need YOUR opinion!
No, this is not some sappy love story. Its not a modern day version of Romeo and Juliette. Its not about a rich guy and poor girl falling in love (or vice versa). Its just my story. Nothing more, nothing less. My story.Were in the car, my whole family. I'm in the second row, next to me is Anna she's 9. Behind us are Michael and George, they are both 7, twins to be exact. My dad in the drivers seat and mom in the passenger. Our sitting arrangements are always the same. Once mom wanted to drive and George made a huge deal about it, from that point on we always stay the same. Anna's playing her new Nintendo DS, she loves it i haven't seen her not using since her birthday, which is when she got it. George and Michael are watching a movie, probably iron man or something. Mom and dad are (as usual) singing to the oldies channel and talking there adult talk. And lastly me. I'm, well I'm just staring into the sky. Looking at the blue and white coloring. The clouds are my favorite, they are beautiful i guess. Even since i was a baby i would be completely fascinated by them, i would fantasize about laying in they and always wondered if they tasted like cotton candy. But i would also just stare, nothing going through my mind. it would be totally blank. It was peaceful i guess, the only moment in my life that nothing matters. I still catch myself doing it, dosing of into the power of the clouds as you may say. I try to stop but something draws me to them. like now, i can't get my eyes of them.
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