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Who are you if you become someone else? Everyone's lost in the maze of pleasing others.. |
| **GIFT POINTS FOR REVIEWING AND RATING!!** I always welcome a thoughtful review-This is one of my newest additions to a variety of thought-provoking poems. Everyone is so caught up in the deceit of seeking others approval. Formatted in rhythmic stanza's. Impostors we've all become So devoured by the game, You can't please everyone They'll just bring about your shame Life isn't quite as fulfilling Displaying truth and sincerity We thrive on jealousy and hate Hypocrites, outdating simplicity Are you blind to reality? As your distorted mirror reflects By far, the strangest of fools- That twisted mind, could collect Disheveled in appearance Strip away the facade I'm disgusted by your weakness With deceit your face is shod Not an ounce of respect Will you receive from me Deserted, you shall drown... In your hypocritic sea |
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