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Star wars epic (part 1)
         Upon Darth Vader's arrival too the planet of Cophrigin, he had only one goal; That of his future bride to be and her execution if she refused. Unbeknownst to him she was a master Jedi knight. She also had a women under her watch present on the planet with her that he had carelessly ignored. A young women with unimaginable powers.
         As Darth Vader said his quaint fair well too the ghostly master Jedi and began to ascend. His ship malfunctions and is sent carefully back down to the ground. In a daze that was stimulated by the force consumed him. A women appears from the waterfall. The same that had protected her former friend.
         She had been the reason of his confusion in the battle. He felt compelled to go too her. She picks up the flower he had so cruelly left in his wake. As it lay bleeding through her hands she stands by him and gently touches his back. A flood of memories not his own fill his mind. He had no control of anything for the first time, sense so long ago, so many times before. Slowly the answers he sought out were answered one by one. He saw the life he needed and wanted. The tears he so desperately wanted to shed escaped him. Many could see it as an act of kindness or cruelty. It was both.
         Letting himself go, they went deeper into the tale that would never be. He watched as he conquered the only one who controlled him. He saw his children and his wife whom still had a ghostly effect even in the memories that she produced for him.
         As if the force had come together for that singular moment the universe in it's entirety was shown too him. The beings it held and the lives he was capable of saving. including himself. He felt love again and it made him want to scream with emotions. Although he didn't realize it time had been passing not for minuets, but days and years at a time. The woman held him in a trance to withhold him from doing anymore damage onto the universe. The only strategy she had.
         His new found love had awaken him from his trance and the flood of truth from his past came back to him. He could only turn facing the women in blank awe. She had just become the most peaceful, but threatening, thing in the universe to him. She was not a Jedi but possessed everything you would hope for in one. She was like the bubbling fountain in which metaclorines poured from to the rivers that dwelt in everything.
         She had been taught from the now dead master Jedi time and dimensional traveling capabilities, but was still wild in her abilities to control it. This unveils the truth of why he had been noticeable as a child, his visions direct. His direct contact with her in this moment of time crossed all his time lines. This is knowledge he was not aware of.
         She withdrew herself in disdain of him. Still standing holding the flower the former master had cherished for so many years he takes it from her and looks upon it for what seems like hours. Time slows once again for the two.
         For the first time she speaks to him directly and almost like an angry mother her voice's tone pricked his ears. He listened to every word. She was a great being he couldn't stand up to and knew it well enough. He didn't consider that his persuading sword had been at his side the whole time. Although her voice surprised him at it's sweetness the words were bitter.

"You cannot leave this planet." She said.

         Turning to the water's, she left him. His goal had become to start making the ship flyable. For weeks he salvaged aimlessly. He returned to her. His suit had become dirty making him look wild. His attitude had completely changed. All aggression cast aside he decided to confront her once again.
         Of course, during this time he was being searched for. She had displaced them in time. The planet no longer was where it should have been. It was gently placed invisible holding him and consequently her. While he was walking to her, past gardens, he found himself helping the gardens for her too see. Although he didn't know why he took it more seriously than he cared to point out to himself. Each blade and dew drop placed with careful precision.The only thing he knew about this mysterious women was that she cared for things around her.
         Looking around the waters he searched more carefully and found a space hidden behind a waterfall. A narrow cave path. Walking along the cave wall barely able to squeeze through with his armor he entered into the only cave room. It had colors dancing around the wall seemed to keep bouncing back to a single brilliant slit of light.
         Inspecting closer he found the light to be unusual and placed his hand into the light. He felt his hand move through the light and dis-attach from himself but also not in an absolute sense. Withdrawing he walked into the brilliant light. Red filled his eyes and he covered his face. He had stepped into a room.
         The women was sitting down watching him struggling with his face. She continued what she was doing. He felt his hands on his face. He had clothes on and the whole of his armor was missing. His hair could be felt from the sudden hairs rising. He was sincerely spooked.
         Awkward silence filled the room as he continued to explore the fact that he was seemingly normal. Not from what his mind had always wandered to being, but he had become it. Knowing very well she sighed and walked away. She whispered under her breathe don't touch anything and suddenly the room was empty.
         He had wandered into her home. He thought about how much better he began to feel here in her home, but quickly displaced it for the many questions he wanted to ask her. The questions he asked himself on top of the ones he had for her were whether or not he was still standing in a cave in his suit imagining he had just done that or he was in fact standing perfectly whole with no signs that he could tell of any past. all metal removed from himself. He was confused.
         He could hear her frustrated in the other room over his thoughts of where he was from. He decided on a simpler question; how did that happen?

"Basic dimension travel," was her answer, "it's not perfected." She said.
         His inquire was more towards himself though. He walked closer into the room she was in. She was standing looking rather bored reading some colors in light that hovered over a tray surrounded by what looked like flowers or fruit. He hesitated at the thought of fruit when one moved to the other side of the display. Looking up she noted his body in a glace so that he felt she knew what he meant.
         He grabbed at a stool and sat directly in front of her. She didn't want to speak anymore but he was intent on discovering more. He shivered as the hairs on his arms through to his head stood on end again. He tried to hold back a sound of excitement. She looked up at him and sighed again in a way that lacked any real emotion to the situation.

"You can leave here." She said, "and will lose the body you have now. Since there is only one way to leave and enter it's safe too assume you will be placed like you were before, But for now and here this is your body, correct?"

         Checking the grip of his hands he acknowledged quietly. She quickly took a hologram picture of him and left the room.

"There, now do you understand? She said loudly in another room.

         He didn't but noticed the incredible difference and change he had just undergone through looking at the hologram that hung where the colors she had just been intently reading were. It was in fact a new security system to require a more sophisticated access of guests into her home. She was making it note that after he left no one was allowed back in. She had never had a guest before and so the system didn't know the difference at the time.
         He detached himself from the moment and started to seek communication with any ships. Didn't matter at that point to himself if it was the enemy or not he would deal with all later anyways. He found their was none on what little he seemed to tinker and hack at.
         Although he was trying to be quiet and use all his abilities for this one task she was knowing and ignored him from the far side of her house. He had stopped realizing that she was capable of doing anything and we was in her territory. The awkwardness of settling in as a guest to someone he found to be soo..her.
         A door clicked in the far part of the house. She stepped outside too sit down and think and process all that had just happened. Although almost two full years (but felt like a few mere hours) had passed to satisfy her quench for her friend, she was still mourning. The house was deep under the planets ocean in a cave. The backyard was actually feet upon feet of glass and ancient sea stones. The mosaic was designed like trees with bits of green glass for leaves.
         Even though they were on the sea floor the stones glowed like the sun was right outside. Delicate plants that were sensitive to light decorated the bottom and a few rare creatures that had become her pets flew around singing in beautiful melodies. She started to sob but remained reserved and walked over too a deep pond that was filled with strange small sea creatures. She sat beside the water and stilled herself.
He was venturing towards the click of the door he had heard. The rooms kept dividing off into long halls. The place was massive and was meant for several comfortable lifetimes.
         He decided to stop following her and began exploring. Finding a hover step that lead downstairs he slowly floated down using the force in the low light of the shoot. The room he found himself in was dark. His body felt new and useful to him. He reached out and clicked a light switch. Something he had not done is such a long time. The room expanded with light and revealed several large cases that had been covered with black sheets. The same material that Jedi knight's preferred too use as clothes.
         He took his time and felt with his hands the familiarities of the texture and drew in a breath. Grabbing the sheet he swept back his arms dramatically letting it fall behind him. The lights within the glass case blinked on. Within it was a display of several different items. The memories of former Jedi knights and masters from when they had fallen in battle. Slowly through time she had dangerously collected their memories. Some items were from their old home world, some were weapons. The room had been filled. A memoir of his destruction he had helped.
         He turned going back upstairs, but stopped. He felt something else was there. He touched along the wall feeling. The wall clicked in revealing another section of the room. She was clever at hiding...almost anything. A large section of the library and been saved in the massive room. He walked over too the familiar console of records. Since he had already witnessed everything from her the curiosity of such memories had all but left him. He looked up his enemies and all recent action but it only revealed to him older accounts and nothing had been updated since his recent occupation of the area. It was useless for him. It was if he had walked into a tomb of the Jedi.
         He left going upstairs and walked further down a hall. He found her room and suddenly the rush of questions he still had flooded him. He walked back to where he thought she was, thinking he had given her enough time. The door clicked behind her as she walked inside. He stared at her at a distance. Their eyes level with each other. Both still remained polite and reserved aside from his quizzical state and her mournful state.
         She had been ignoring him and avoiding him in an obvious way. Not wanting her to run off again he stood his ground and approached her quickly till his shadow blanketed her. She looked up at him directly her eyes still teary. Losing his train of thought he lost himself within her eyes. The thought of touching her skin crossed his mind. He hadn't felt the touch of skin on his own hands for what felt like an eternity. He thought of how to without her rejecting him again of her company. His demeanor softened before her. She knew what he was thinking and pulled back without moving and held herself crossing her arms around herself. His hand raised to brush her arm but he stopped. She looked away indifferent and he stepped aside in respect.
         She walked away into the corridors disappearing into one of the many rooms. He looked down in a sigh. He couldn't withhold his joy when he saw her return with some objects.

"I don't believe your ready to leave, but you must take care of yourself while you are here." She said.

         He took them into his arms happily and watched her leave. Walking through the halls he opened the doors with the force searching through finding a room he liked. Taking one of the devices he places it in the bathroom watching as it slowly fills the room in a mist. He walks into the bedroom and disrobes making his way back into the thick mist. He washed his body relishing the warmth. His body tingled making him laugh out loud in excitement. Raising his hands up he cleaned his hair and face. He sat down leaning against the wall in an ecstasy over the whole moment.
         Pulling himself back in he rose and walked over to the side of the wall and watched as device extended from the wall drying the water from him in a warm breeze. Shaking his head with a smile he takes one of the devices and watched as it hovered about the room and scanned new clothes onto him. Comfortable yet light. Suddenly he realized he had not eaten since his arrival to the planet but was squirmish about the thought of going through her kitchen.
         As if she knew he heard an over-voice calling him to the dinning hall in a melodic metallic voice. As he approached he saw a large table covered in many foods and dishes of every kind. She looked up from behind a large display of nostalgic foods that looked delicious. Retaining his excitement he waited for her to tell him to seat himself. A single chair that had been placed away from her pulled to him in the force and he sat down politely. She ate quietly, not really eating at all, as she shoved certain foods around her plate. He was just relieved none of it was moving and alive on his. Breaking the silence after a few hungry bites he said, um... and picked up his glass drinking the sweet cold water. He watched as her head popped out from hiding still chewing on her salad. hmm? and slipped away.
         He pulled a blue and green fruit to himself and started to carve it into a elaborate design. It then hovered over the large table finding it's way to her plate. Silence. He heard her make a noise he didn't quite understand followed by a giggle and then sobbing. His face became quizzical in out of sheer curiosity he stood looking around the table to see she had left with the carved fruit remaining on the plate. With his appetite sated for the moment he left to retire in his room that he had claimed. With no sense of time he slept for a few hours.
         He awoke to hear a shifting with the entrance and in surreal speed stood by the door watching her appear. He could see the restraint she had when she saw him. Like a scream in her head that echoed out to him. It occurred to him that he was enjoying his body greatly and didn't wish to return to his former form.
         She was carrying tools and other random objects so he took them from her allowing them to hover about while she held on to one of the tools. She quietly walked to the back towards the garden as he followed from a distance she turned quickly with an angry look and started grabbing into the air at the objects. He gently placed them back and watched her leave.
         He walked back to the entrance thinking of how his armor was only arms reach away and so was the life he was having trouble returning too. Although the situation remained, she was holding them in both time and space rendering him trapped. His decision was to remain and learn from her. This mysterious & furious woman.


The End of Part 1. Continues to Part 2.
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