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by Chaos
Rated: 18+ · Fiction · Fanfiction · #1886902
My first story. Naruto life as become one large simon says game.
In the village of Konaha, Naruto Uzumaki is depresed. He has brought back Tsunade to be Hokage, but Sakura still likes Sasuke better then him. As he sits in his apartment a bright flash of light apears. When the light ends, he finds a scroll on his lap. He opens the scroll to see whats inside.

Congratulations! You have been chosen to receive the title of SIMON. Your life has been turned into a game of Simon Says, and you are the star. But you need to remember, even if the other players do not know about the game, the rules still apply. Have fun with your new life.

Naruto finishes the scroll, and starts to laugh. He believes that the scroll is a prank. Naruto heads down to Ichiraku's to get some ramen. While siting down Naruto decides to try out his "title" to see if it really is fake.

"Hey Ayame give me the money in the register," Naruto says knowing she would not normaly do that.

"Sorry Naruto I can't do that," Ayame says, thinking he was doing a prank.

Naruto is about to give up, and admit to himself that it was a prank, when he remembered the rest of the scroll. It said that the rules of the game still apply, and in Simon Says, you only do something when SIMON SAYS is said first. Naruto decides to try again, thinking it will make him look stupid.

"NARUTO SAYS: give me the money in the register," Naruto says. Naruto is shocked when Ayame opened the register, and handed him all the money inside. Ayame felt like their was something wrong with what she just did, but that feeling soon went away.

Naruto stares at the money in his hand, and realizes that the scroll was real. He then smirks when he realized, he could do anything he wanted.

"NARUTO SAYS: make me a free bowl of ramen," Naruto says.

After eating his ramen, Naruto heads out into the village wondering what to do. To be continued.

Part 2.

Naruto is walking around the village when he realized he was late to see the Hokage. Naruto runs to the tower, and finds Tsunade alone in her office.

"Sorry i'm late Grandma," Naruto says before ducking under a paperweight.

"I told you not to call me that brat," Tsunade says, already angry about Naruto being late.

Naruto is about to talk back when he gets an idea.

"NARUTO SAYS:  feel happy every time I call you Grandma," Naruto says thinking it will let him call her that for now on.

What Naruto does not know is that the one that gave him his powers was a pervert. It has decide to use another version of being happy. Specificly arousal.

"So what do you need me for Grandma," Naruto says not knowing what he just did.

Tsunade on the other hand feels her pussy getting wet from the name Naruto called her. She had never realized how much she loved the name naruto gave her. She quickly snaps out of it, and looks at Naruto.

"I don't know if I should tell you brat with you showing up late," Tsunade says her anger returning,

Naruto thinks about how to get Tsunade to tell him, forgeting that he could command her to. He decides to complament her, but can't come up with any thing on the spot. He decides to use his power to help him.

"NARUTO SAYS: take whatever I say about you as a complament, and feel happy about it.," Naruto says.

Once again what Naruto said will be changed from how he wanted it. Now Tsunade will take anything Naruto says about her as something normal to be complamented about, and will feel aroused by the complaments.

"Your tits, and ass are looking great today Grandma," Naruto said saying the first thing that came to his head.

Tsunade feels her pussy getting even wetter. It felt so good when Naruto complamented.her. She should where tighter clothes so Naruto would talk about her tits(why did she ever call them breasts before), and ass again.

"Fine brat, but you will still have to be punished," Tsunade says trying to ignore her arousal.

Naruto is about to complane when he gets a perverted idea.

"NARUTO SAYS: beileve that me spanking you is a good punishment," Naruto says laughing inside.

Tsunade thinks about what punishment to give Naruto. Finaly she comes up with a great one.

'Why have I never thought about this before,' Tsunade thinks ignoring the sense of wrongness,

"Alright brat I have decided your punishment. Sit in the chair," Tsunade says. Naruto does as she says, and she lies across his legs.

"Your punishment is five spankings," Tsunade says normaly.

"Thats a great idea Grandma," Naruto says.

Tsunade face gains a small blush as she gets horner. She realizes that spankings are a great punishment, and everytime Naruto does something wrong he should have to give them.

Naruto raises his hand above his head.

SMACK!1SMACK!2SMACK!3SMACK!4SMACK!5

Tsunade, and Naruto get up, and Tsunade sits back down.

"Alright brat time for your mission. You are to train with Sakura," Tsunade says.

Naruto starts thinking about his mission, and gets an idea.

"NARUTO SAYS: give me premission to do whatever I want with Sakura," Naruto says with a smile.

"You are the team leader of this mission, so Sakura must do whatever you order, or she'll face a punishment," Tsunade says thinking it's a good idea.

"I'll do my best Grandma," Naruto says before leaving.

As soon as Naruto left Tsunade starting masturbaiting, about her meeting with Naruto.

To be continued.

Part 3

Naruto is sitting at a training ground waiting for Sakura to show up. after thinking about it for a while, Naruto has decided to train Sakura to be his girlfriend. Naruto fells sweat driping down his neck, so he takes off his shirt. A thomp is sound, but Naruto did not hear it.

"Naruto! What are you doing you perverted idiot?," Sakura say, embarassed.

Naruto is startled. Naruto turns around to see an angry Sakura coming at him. He decides to do the first thing that came to mind.

"NARUTO SAYS stop caring about clothing," Naruto says quickly to get out of this mess.

Naruto does not realize what he has just done. Since Sakura stoped caring about clothes, she will also stop caring about not wearing clothes. Nudity is now completly normal to  her now.

Sakura is confused about she was just angry about, so she moves to a new topic.

"I can't beleve the Hokage is making me train with you idiot. Well if were training, it's going to be my way," Sakura says not caring that Naruto is shirtless.

Naruto is at first happy that Sakura stoped caring about the shirt, but gets angry when she tells him what to do. Grandma Tsunade made him team leader so she had to do what he told her to. He needed to fix this.

"NARUTO SAYS do everything I tell you to," Naruto says not wondering how the wish would work. From now on Sakura will do everything he tells her to do as fast as possible. Naruto decides to test out his command,

"Sakura, as team leader, I command you to to grab your tit," Naruto says. Sakura gains a blush, but does it.

"Sakura tell me a reason why you wont go out with me," Naruto says wanting to see if he could fix it.

"Because you would embarress me in public," Sakura says.

Naruto wonders how he could stop embarressing Sakura, when he gets a better idea.

"NARUTO SAYS stop being embaressed," Naruto says.

The blush on Sakura's face vanishs. Why should she be embaressed. Their is noting in the world thtat can embaress her.

Naruto decides to start her training, and gets out a bag from a shop he went to. First he needed to command her to do something.

"NARUTO SAYS feel happy when ever you make me happy," Naruto says remember how people should be happy when others are happy. Naruto commands will have a other effect. Now Sakura will get more aroused the more she makes Naruto happy.

Naruto turns his bag upside down, and two dildos fall out.

"Sakura, your training for today is to walk around with these dildos in your ass, and pussy. You will have to clamp down to make sure they don't fall out. You are not to let anyone know about them. As extra training, at any building you go into you will find a way to massterbate to an orgasm about being my girlfriend, without leting anyone know," Naruto says with a smirk.

"Yes Naruto," Sakura says with no questions. Sakura graps the two dildos, and puts them in as quickly as she could. She then leaves for her training.

Naruto is happy that Sakura is going to do his train when he thinks about something. "I could of just said NARUTO SAYS train to be my girlfriend," Naruto says. He then went home depressed that he could have done this faster.

That night at the Hyuga house a girl sits alone in her room. She was spying on Naruto earler when whe fainted. When she woke up new thoughts were going around her head. She does not care about clothes. She does everything Naruto tells her to.She does not feel embarssed. She only feels happy when she is making Naruto happy. All of her training is to be Naruto's girlfriend. She sits in her room naked, with a book a branch member told her would help her be a good girlfriend. It is a story about a women he gave everything to a man. He was her lover, her master, her god. The girl looks in her closet to see a orange maid outfit. "Don't worry Naruto. Your girlfriend is coming too make you happy," the girl says.

That night Hanabi Hyuga, Hinatas'(In this world) one year younger sister sleep with her mind filled with thoughts about her new god.

To be continued.

Part 4

A new day has come to Konaha. Naruto has just woken up, and is geting ready. Naruto is about to leave when he finds a letter on his door. Naruto opens it, and finds out he has a performance review today. Naruto is excited that he might be able to become a chunin. Naruto heads to the Hokage tower where the review will take place. He goes into the review room, and sees Shizune.

"Hey Shizune, are you doing the review,?" Naruto says with a smile.

"Yes I am, Naruto," Shizune says, returning the smile.

"Great, I will show you i'm good enough to be chunin," Naruto says.

Shizune's smile turns sad. "Sorry Naruto, this exam will not help with rank," Shizune says.

Naruto good mood ends at this point. While trying to come up with a way to make the review funer, Naruto that Shizunes pretty cute. He grins as he gets an idea.

"NARUTO SAYS beleve that this is your performance review, and that I am the one review you," Naruto says.

Shizune has a smile headache, and wonders whats going on. After a few seconds she remember's that Naruto is giving her performance review. "So what do you want to review first, Naruto," Shizune says.

Naruto is about to tell her to do something when he realizes something. Shizune was the one who was going to give the review so she would know what was on it. If he tells her to do something not on the review she'll know. Suddenly Naruto gets an idea.

"NARUTO SAYS do anything I tell you to do, answer any question I ask you truthfuly, and beleve that they are normal parts of the review so you should not be embarrssed," Naruto says.

Shizune's mind emptys of knowledge about the review, and she waits for Naruto to tell her about the review. What Naruto does not know is that the review is for both the ninja carrer, and life. The things performed during the review, will shape Shizune's life for now on.

"Okay lets start with your clothes," Naruto says. "Your clothes are bad. Your clothes need to be tighter. They need to be able to show off your tits, and be short enough that when you bend over your underwear shows," Naruto says.

Shizune is horrorfied that she allowed her self to dress like this. After the review she'll go shoping. Naruto moves on to his next idea.

"Speaking about your underwear I must she them," Naruto says. Shizune quickly take off her pants, hoping she is wearing the right underwear.

Naruto licks his lips as he stares at Shizune's panties clad ass. He snaps out of it, and takes a closer look at her panties. "Panties? I has hope he cared about your life, but I guess wrong. You must wear a thong everyday. Girls wear them because it feels so good when it goes up their ass,"Naruto says.

Shizune feels like she was going to throw up. Was she such a bad person that she would not even follow the basic female clothing rules. Shizune thanks Naruto for helping her fix herself.

Naruto has decide to have some fun. "It's time I test your tits, Take off your shirt," Naruto commands. As Shizune quickly does Naruto takes off his pants, and lets his dick out. "Alright, place my dick in between your tits," Naruto commands. Shizune does it. "Alright, while your giving me a boobjob, I will tell you about the flaws I have found in your personality," Naruto says trying to sound smart.

Shizune quickly starts the boobjob. " Okay I will explain how you should have been acting. First(grunt) girls should always do as their told. Second(oh god) women will never disagree with a man, Third(shes licking it) if a man cum enters a womens mouth she has become his . and only his, slave," Naruto says. He is about to cum when he sees Shizune closing her mouth,. "NARUTO SAYS swallow my cum," Naruto says.

Shizune opens her mouth, and gets back to licking. Soon Naruto cums on her face, and she licks it off. Shizune gets a dazed look as her mind accepts it's role as a slave. Naruto smiles, thinking that using a book as a script was a great idea. Naruto gets up, and heads for the door. "NARUTO SAYS forgot that this happened, and right up a good review for me," Naruto says, thinking it will get rid of his commands.

What Naruto does not know is that he is making her forget the event happining, that the leasons she learned. As the door closes, a small sound is heard. "Master."

to be continued.
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