Nicely done. Eastern Montana has a BIG sky. I live in the west snuggled between mountains.
I loved the openness of Kansas... one reason why I'm going back to Isan in Thailand. "A little bit of who I am" resonates with wide open agricultural areas.
My uncle Jeb went overseas
to fight against Vietnamese,
where battle pitch was amplified
when outside influences tried
to turn the conflict on its side.
Beware the spider's tangled trap,
or you will be one sorry chap.
Our brave young soldiers could not hide
from Agent Orange herbicide,
which spread upon the summer breeze
and later caused severe disease
for those engaged with enemies.
Beware the spider's tangled trap,
or you will be one sorry chap.
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