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I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Beginnings - chapter 2 (2nd draft)  (13+)
Second chapter of story detailing mankind's efforts at establishing a trans-solar colony
. It's the second draft of the chapter I had posted earlier. I believe I've fixed a great many of the problems present in the original.
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Beginnings - chapter 1 (2nd draft)  (13+)
The first chapter of a sci-fi novel describing mankind's first extrasolar colony
. It's the second draft of the first chapter of my sci-fi work, and I think I've fixed most of the previous problems with it.

I would be most interested in hearing your thoughts on the rewrite.
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