Best Bits: My favourite part was definitely the ending, it was funny. The fact that the Dream Pince ended up being a pillow made me laugh. I love the title! It has a clever double meaning that I didn't notice until the end of the poem. I took 'Dream Prince' to mean that he was perfect, till it turned out that he literally was a dream.
Suggestions: I don't have anything at all to put here, hence the five stars.
My oppinion: I've just read your bio and I'm quite surprised to find out that you're a sixty-five year old man. You've portrayed the thoughts and feelings of a teenaged girl really well (I should know, I am one!) A great poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, excellent job!
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Best Bits: My favourite part was definitely the ending, it was funny. The fact that the Dream Pince ended up being a pillow made me laugh. I love the title! It has a clever double meaning that I didn't notice until the end of the poem. I took 'Dream Prince' to mean that he was perfect, till it turned out that he literally was a dream.
Suggestions: I don't have anything at all to put here, hence the five stars.
My oppinion: I've just read your bio and I'm quite surprised to find out that you're a sixty-five year old man. You've portrayed the thoughts and feelings of a teenaged girl really well (I should know, I am one!) A great poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, excellent job!