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Review of Equinox Perfume  
Review by F. Garcia
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good one....
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Review by F. Garcia
Rated: E | (5.0)
Its good, you should continue writing this as a novel. And I suggest you should include the incantation sentences, it would be more terrific if you would.
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Review by F. Garcia
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like the repetition of "you taught" on the first paragraph, and the capitalized words was effective on me because i tend to read it with emphasis. I like reading poems with rhymes and i think you did great with it....
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