I think this is a great piece. The only reason this didn't get a five, and this is just being nit picky, but I felt it had so much potential. Your ability is quite evident throughout the work but I feel like at times you just went astray from your natural ability. Otherwise it was just fantastic. Your talent for imagery is I think unlimited and you utilize it multiple times. Terrific job! :)
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