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Review by PuppyPooka
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow, that's powerful. Without too much angst, you provide a clear picture of a character, a life, and a conflict. It's a situation that crops up a lot these days, and I like the way you kept everyone almost archetypal - "The Daughter", "The Boyfriend", "The Ex" - personifying them in this way makes them representative of anyone in the situation, and the father... well, he almost broke my heart at the end.
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Review of A Love So Divine  
Review by PuppyPooka
Rated: E | (3.5)
Despite my usual feelings of hatred for loose poetic forms, I enjoyed your poem. It created a clear and nice picture of the relationship. One line puzzles me: "Offered no elicit futility on the subject" - I just can't figure out what you meant by this, and I worry that it inhibits my understanding of your poem.
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