Lovely poetry, I am a big fan of poetry. I would like to be you, if I could. But that isn't possible. You are a good poet. You made poetry into something else. Keep up the great work. I hope you make more if you could. Good wishes. Also family is the most important thing out there.
I love poetry. This is one of the best I have seen today. You are a poet, a artist. You keep this up you are going to go somewhere. I hope you make some more. I like your thinking and creativity. Please make some more poetry. You are amazing at this. Best wishes!
Love the story. You should keep on writing. You are good at storytelling. Hope you make some more stories. If this was a book I would buy it then read it 50 times over and over again. You in my opinion are a world are the best writer I know yet. Keep up the good work.
I cannot believe how good your stories are! You keep making me amazed that there are people who can be as good as a writer as you. You should become a published writer. You never cease to amaze me. Your stories about animal are never boring. They make my heart stop at every cliffhanger. Keep up the good work!!!
Don't worry, I was happy reading it. I did not see that many mistakes. I liked reading this and poetry. I believe that you are destined for greatness. Good luck, with the next writing pieces. If you continue to keep writing. Good wishes, and keep trying.
Nice documentary on Whales.....I am just kidding. That was a nice documentary on Santa missing. It really got me confused at first. But then I read at the top that it was a documentary. It was full of emotion. It really got me into the after-christmas spirit. You have a way with documentary's that I could never have. Keep up the good work!! ;)
That was...Awesome. It really makes me think of the sunset and dark from a new angle. Thank you for that Heather. That was a really nice piece of writing. I could not have done that better myself. I couldn't even if I tried. Nice job I did not see any problems with this at all. You should make more of these types of stories. Amazing. Keep up the good work. Never Stop believing!
10.0 stars out of 5.0 stars. You are AMAZING! I hope that you make more stories about animals. I hope you slither into more ideas for stories. You are the next generation writer.(So advanced). I hope you make more of these. This story made my heart almost stop. The detail of Big Mama made me almost visualize the snake. I think describing the detail is your specialty. Also writing in general. Good luck and keep up the good work!!!
That is a action-packed. I like this story. I am glad you did not delete it. I think you are a extremely talented person. I think you put a lot of time and effort. I think that you should make more stories about of history. It is amazing. Stay frosty.
This is emotional for the, tribes that were relocated to Oklahoma. I am a history fanatic. The way you made this into a poem made me shed a tear. You are a poet, a master of poetry. Hope that you make more poetry. I like your kind of style. Keep up the great work.
A conflict that has to be solved. People should come together in peace, not discrimination. Everyone has rights, and I think you showed what is happening at our schools and colleges around the world. You are fluent in peace and things that are right. You are a peacekeeper and a amazing writer. Keep up the good work!!
That was a lovely poem, especially the part for the "Special Someone". I bet she would be amazed by this piece of art. You are a poet. I showed this to my girlfriend and she bursted into tears, and said that was amazing. You should keep doing poetry. Poetry and you have a connection that makes this work. Amazing, Keep it up!!
I honestly love this piece, because I love history. The way you told this story is amazing. I wish I could tell stories the way you do. You are amazing and smart. I like the way you tell how the colonists started. You should keep doing history or stories in general. You are an artist. You are the perfectionist. Keep it up.
That just echoed through my brain. This makes me look at my life in a different way. I love poets and poetry. This is amazing keep up the great work. It makes me think different about everything. You are one of those people who have a talent. You just showed the whole world that you have a talent(I do not mean this rudely, like you don't have a talent, I think you do). Keep up the amazing work. (:
I think you did a pretty good job with this type of writing You did better than I could. You are the next poet of this generation. An artist. You make the best poetry that I have read all day. I hope that you make some more. Poetry!
This is a emotional poem especially the line that says: "He lived inside an anguished Hell". That is a meaningful line it symbolizes the baby without the parents. I get this poem because my brother had a attachment disorder to my mom. It was funny but we got that fixed. The struggle of Attachment disorder is a real struggle for kids to overcome. People should be worried about kids not having parents.
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