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Review of Old Route 33  
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Rated: E | (2.0)
The sequence of dates in the dream aren't in chronological order. 1850,1860,1840. Is there any significance to the order? The story is interesting. How did the narrative get involved towards the end of the story? where's the rest of the story. The story is interesting, but should be longer, with more explanation.
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