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Review by Lissa
Rated: E | (3.0)
Looks good! Nice descriptive language!
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Review by Lissa
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was very chilling. Well done though! I liked how you went from longer sections to shorter and then ended abruptly, but completely. Good job!!
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Review by Lissa
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked your story. Don't you dare throw it out!! Maybe finish it with:
Tiffany forgives me.
Why does she forgive me?
I don't care. We are together.
Forever and ever.
That's what I would do, but I also like your ending!
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