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Review of Why did I try...  
Review by Amanda
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! That was great! I hate to say this but this is extremely impressive writing about feelings, especially coming from a guy. I am only saying this because all the guys I know would never in a million years write about their feelings at all, let alone the way you did. When you wrote "the first poem I wrote..", you did it straight on, it was pure poetry! I loved it!

The only thing I would fix is your grammar and typos. If they are in there on purpose, it fits well. I am just saying this because I am an English nerd. It is my passion as well as my biggest pet peeve!
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Review by Amanda
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
WONDERFUL!
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Review of Remember Me Not  
Review by Amanda
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was very well written. you just summarized most of my high school life has been like. Well said!!
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Review by Amanda
Rated: E | (3.0)
It was really good! If i were you, i wouldn't be so specific on things like verb as a noun or whatever.
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