Poetry is melodious way of expressions, in this case, words seem to be too less for the melody to be music to ears.
Beginning and ending is perfect, may be the middle is lacking in depth.
All in all, enjoyed the content but as a critique, wanted some more depth in the content.
Nice melody for the ears, but less on content.
Poetic expression is although brilliant.
It's usually difficult to recite in a hurry, but here the poet is to an extent successful in doing so.
As a critique, my rating is 2.5 stars, it would had been 3, had the content been more in brief.
What a waist of my precious time.
You call it a test? Your first item?
I was excited with the heading, thinking i'll be getting to review a raw, first timer.
What have you written? Your heading is longer than your content.
Small is beautiful, but with some sense.
Interesting material, specially the heading.
Poetic explanation is justified and keeps you glued.
Just the ending is somewhere hurried.
Little more depth would had made it a master class.
All in all a very satisfying content.
Do write more, your stuff seems to be worth reviewing.
Satisfaction is prime objective in anything you do in life.
Whether you answer a query or put up a question?
Above content is fulfilling and to the point.
That's the best thing in it, as my motto of life is.... SHORT, SIMPLE and STRAIGHT!
Tips for improvement? You don't need any!
Whenever journey is discussed in words,those lines instantly come to my mind.....
" woods are lovely dark and deep, but i have promises to keep, and miles to go before i sleep, and miles to go before i sleep ".
I read those lines in school and thus are a special part of my life.
" I am shaped by the journey ", brought me back to my school days.
It is smart writing with a bit of heart involved in it but when your expectations increase, it sort of lets you down.
That zest for more is felt at the end of it.
Journey well begun, should always end well.
More than the middle content, beginning and a decent ending is the need of the hour.
I would over all rate the above content as average.
No doubt the beginning and the title, impressed me a lot.
The soul got lost somewhere in between. That zest, i could feel, as a reader and a writer.
It could have been a master class, if the soul was maintained through out.
Take my review positively, and enjoy writing!
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