Shukare's (amrosh10) Reviews

Shukare

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18 Public Reviews Given

18 Total Reviews Given

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#4050007

Review of The Oak

Review by Shukare

Rated: E

| (5.0)

The personification of the oak was against the contest rules. Yet it was a good story.

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#4042556

Review of Reality Rift

Review by Shukare

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Well, it would have been great if we knew what was worrying him! If you start with the argument with his wife then the syringe then sleep then the knife, it would have been a nightmare in the nightmare. It`s my opinion. What I liked is the simple language you are using, keep doing this and don`t believe anyone telling you to use complicated words. And the action, I would have liked more if you added some dialogue. Well I`m giving it 3.5.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4041640

Review of Over Before It Started

Review by Shukare

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Funny!

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#4041125

Review of Daily Flash Fiction Challenge

Review by Shukare

Rated: 13+

| (1.0)

Reviewers like God they think they can change posts anytime they like!

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#4040847

Review of Knights

Review by Shukare

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

Nice!

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#4040845

Review of "MUMMY THE SKY IS FALLING"

Review by Shukare

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Lovely! The strong owe it to the weak. it`s really a hideous disgrace.
Thank you

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#4040158

Review of Unemployment Bites

Review by Shukare

Rated: 18+

| (1.5)

Not very clever!

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#4040143

Review of The Porcelain King

Review by Shukare

Rated: 13+

| (2.0)

Well, nice writing but without content! or maybe I missed something!

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#4039718

Review of Hells children chapters 1-7

Review by Shukare

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Didn`t finish it but I like it. I will continue and give final review

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#4039583

Review of SLUDGE attacks the goddess

Review by Shukare

Rated: ASR

| (3.0)

Interesting and clever!

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#4039582

Review of Louis and Jacqui

Review by Shukare

Rated: ASR

| (3.0)

I liked dialogue, simple language. "The thunder of hooves pounding the ground echoed in his ears" is good. I am not fully attached to the story but in general, I think you have an easy language that can go into mind and heart. That means you are a writer!