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Review by Amy Decuir
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like what you did with this. I'm not a fan of haikus, I would've rather it been a poem so I could have a little more information on the geese and why they're crying. I just needed something a little deeper. Haikus are hard to put emotion into unless you try super duper hard. So, basically, I love the concept, just wish it wasn't a teeny tiny haiku.
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