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Review of Butterflies Die  
Review by AngieM
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
This is a beautiful story. It brought tears to my eyes. I wrote a similar poem that's on my profile called 'The Butterfly'. Great writing.

Angie
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Review by AngieM
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, my name is Angie. I think it is a very entertaining story. It pulled me in from the beginning and made me want to know more. I would, however, double-check the spelling and maybe the format. For example, the last sentence, "As the time past", it should be "passed". Just a few typos and check the paragraph spacing. Otherwise, I think you have a great story on your hands. Good luck and keep writing.

~Angie
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