This story is pretty good. I like it. It has a few funny moments as well as a few great moments from Z. Anyway, I hope to see the next chapter and see what Z and Ben will go through next.
This is one of the best stories in writing.com I have ever read. Please proceed with it. I do have a suggestion though; when Ryder begins training, he seems to make faster progress than a normal person would, you know to emphasise the fact that he is special. So, what do you say?
This. Is. The. Most. AWESOME STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!! I want to see more chapters of this story being typed SOON. You can tell that I wil be a big fan of this story fom now on. I would also like to thank the other accounts who added chapters to this little adventure.
Hey can you maybe work on this chapter next, "He wakes to find himself so big he can't get out of the cave"? Please? Thanks! I appreciate it a lot. Oh and I'll be trying my best to, you know, stay updated with whatever's new in this site. I know that you may not be one of the people who manage this website, but I thought I'd tell someone... heeheehee...
I have read most of this interactive... and I have to say, it is one of the BEST stories I have read. I especially proud of the fact that the main character is, afterall, a demigod. I hope that you will be able to put many more chapters to come. Thanks for writing it.
You should know: this IS one of my favorite stories. I have read every possibility on this but it is just, overal, impressive. I wish to see more additions to this interactive tale of yours just to see where it will lead. I hope it will update again... SOON!!!
I would like, first, to say how honored I an to be in your group and for what it means. But, I must also warn you; I may be lazy and contribute very little to the group at times. However, what I can contribute may be really, REALLY good, so I'm going to try my very best at it, (considering the lazy part I just wrote about).
I honestly think that this is a good plot for an interactive story. A UFO is what seems to lasso people of all kinds. You have made a fan of me. I will happily see the rest of the Interactive Soty. Thanks for starting it; I'm going to recomend this to all my friends!
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