freespirit's (archanam2008) Reviews

freespirit

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#4610411

Review of Conversation with a bird

Review by freespirit

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Amazing poem! The tempo, the rhyme and the humour, all flow effortlessly. It was a delight to read

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#4553535

Review of The Pink Dress

Review by freespirit

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is so beautiful Lili J. ! The perfect fairy tale in a modern world, your story makes one think that even in today's difficult world one can pursue their passions and be happy too.

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#4553534

Review of After It All

Review by freespirit

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Very poignant Mar Prax! In such few words, you have conveyed the entire premise to the point. The pain and the helplessness of the protagonist is very palpable. Bravo!

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#4534509

Review of Heartburn

Review by freespirit

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Dear Prosperous Snow,your poem Heartburn is absolutely real! It resonates with the sentiments of so many people, it's uncanny. The flow of words is very simple, yet so poignant. It's a very well written, touching poem. I hope you did win the contest.

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#4503563

Review of As The Green Turns To Gold

Review by freespirit

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Let me first say, bravo! I salute your spirit, your love and your understanding.
With this song, you have given a true message of hope, love and new beginnings.
It is always important to understand that though our sorrows make a deep impression on us, yet it is imperative that we learn to move forward with old memories and new.

The words in your song are absolutely honest and straight forward. They fill the reader with hope for a new stage in life. Perfect.

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#4501907

Review of IMPORTANCE OF PRECIOUS PEOPLE

Review by freespirit

Rated: E

| (3.5)

The article touches very nicely on the love that we share with people around us, whom we ignore to appreciate. It could have been a little more concise, but the emotions expressed are lovely.
Keep up the good work.

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#4501795

Review of Depression

Review by freespirit

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Tmtsaturn! You have captured the state of a depressed mind truly well.
I would suggest a little refinement in the comparisons - "security walls made of thick metals" can be better illustrated as "thick confining walls".
All the best, keep up the good work!