Green is a color that reflects for "life."
It sometimes use for the word "fresh" or even "refresh."
Also, for us to save our mother earth, it also need to be green as "clean."
And so many more! But all in all, green is a positive reflection and meaning.
Somewhat, blue is an ordinary favorite color of general public. My feelings to this article is, being different in the midst of ordinary. Having this green dream in the midst of the blue sky environment. Dream on! And don't bother if you are being different, different for good purpose.
I found your piece very alive. It talks to every reader. It gets them into the words you have built. After reading this, bliss is what get my feels. Though I don't really know what welsh is, this piece of yours is very capturing and sticking. Hope to see more of your produce.
Thank you for this Mary Ann!
This piece is really romantic. I believe that love is the gigantic topic of all generation. But whatever kind of love everybody has, the love of a married couple is the most blessed love of all! True love indeed is patient and kind. And this piece of yours have shown this kind of love.
Hooray for your writing as early as twelve!
This captivates any reader's emotion. It's kind of a lonely emotion really. But then, I must agree to the line which states "die not in vain" because everyone has their purpose for their living. May you continue to write poems to inspire and motivate every individual to never waste their lives as to not die in vain. Cheers to more writing!
This one's a bloody story! I almost imagined myself lurking at about 10 to 15 steps behind them. Found some typographical error though, but the story itself is more than fine. :) The story delivers what is purports to be. The usage of the words were carefully picked and match what the story wants to portray.
Hi there,
I have read you post and it leads me into commenting and to leave a review.
As I have read your work, I notice something that seems to be a kind of confusing or is this just some kind of a typographical error? There, right after the: "You have to reach to school early." There also goes another quotation mark (“) after a comma (,). This might be a powerful catch for a story, but you have to be very careful in using signs like apostrophe or quotation marks because these will get your readers into confusion of who is talking in the written story. Like what I have experienced in reading it. I guess, you have to be careful in proofreading your work before you publish it into the public because sometimes, our gadget or apps which we use in writing doesn’t really do proofreading for us (hehe). Computers also commit mistakes (sometimes). This is why we should be careful. Either, we read and read again our work until we are sure that it has no error anymore or we could also ask a friend to proofread for us. Or hire an expert I guess? But, yes this one is a good start! And never be afraid on errors because, with these we learn. We need them, as a writer.
But all the more, I believe that this is just a typographical error made by our computer. I am very excited in reading the produce of your creativity in writing. Enjoy and more to writing for you!
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