This was very refreshing. Dark poetry is not something I ever really read. However, you made me change my mind. I was very intrigued. Sometimes I have a difficult time following poems, but yours just clicked in my head. Great job! This is what writing is all about!
Whaa! I want to know what he wrote down. Why are they going to the fort? You have hooked me! Such a simple read but very enjoyable. Mike and Jack have a neat relationship. Well done.
Absolute joy to read! I felt for Alyzia so bad. Her father was really brutal. He should have been proud that his daughter was a natural with the sword. This is such an innocent fun story. I can't wait to learn more about these Dark Mages. And see how Alyzia is able to harness these new powers of hers. If you had any grammer errors, i didnt noticed. I was too into the story to notice. Keep it up!
Do it! I support you in all your endeavors. I know you can do it! I am on the same journey as you. Put that positive energy into the world. Never stop. Never quit. Let me know when your stuff is done.
Great job! I love your take on death. Spectre is funny and charming and I loved his relationship with Morticia. Such a fantastic story idea. Your writing was easy to follow. Dialogue clever and made me smile. I'm glad I'm not on that island lol. I'll be checking up on this story. I do want to read more.
I enjoyed what you did with the font. The color and size really gave this piece dimension. Making it very fun to look at as well as read. I can see the picture you were trying to create. Great job.
This put a smile on my face. Short and sweet. I feel like you can use another word instead of crackers. To me it didn't fit. Maybe find a different word to end it with. Besides that I hope the man from Caracas keeps shaking his maracas!
Bravo! This really had me reflecting on life itself. Very profound indeed. I was able to visually see the story you painted. It got deep fast. I enjoyed it a lot.
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