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Review of Laughter  
Review by Babbette Francis
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for reviewing my piece. Here's my review to you.

I enjoyed the interduction and look forward to reading more. Glad to see another spook writer out there.

one or two typo's, that I can see.

1)It was supposed to be a summer of endless skateboarding, the last summer * i * had with my
friends before we went off to college.-- i should be I-


2) For his 12th birthday my parents had bought him
* an * huge 30 gallon fish tank, --- an should be a-

3)" EllE, LEAVE ME ALONE SHE TOLD ME TO!" there's a Space between the parenthesis and the E
and you may concider a period after the word Alone.

I loved the story!!

I will be reading more. :)
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Review of Truth  
Review by Babbette Francis
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing really touched my heart in a way you could probably never understand. I am very concerned about my husbands health-Please pray for him- His name is Percy. Anyway, your poem really reached in and took hold of my heart and it was just the message I needed right now. I want to thank you for sharing you thoughts. It really touched me.
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