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Review of Evanescent  
Review by Bec
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Smile* I see you are a bit of a newbie to this site.

This poem has such an excellent rhythm to it that is uninterupted throughout the entire piece, which I think is great.

The rhyme in this poem works very well, and feels very natural and breezy.

In the fourth stanza, last line (And bath the earth in new found light?) I think 'bath' should here be 'bathe'

But apart from that, this poem id very well written, and the meaning behind is shines through.

Good job-
StrawberryDreams (becxx)

PS- If you need any help or anything with the site, don't hesitate to ask :)
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Review of The walk  
Review by Bec
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A bit different, and good :)

there were quite a few spelling errors( you might want to read through and edit for them)
but it was pretty good otherwise.
I think a new paragraph for 'walking next to some woods I started to hear...' because that is a different scene to the other half of the paragraph( paragraph2)

Hope my review helps in any way :)
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