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Review by BlueMoth
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a great poem, creating all the surrounding awkwardness, and it marvels the readers with its coherent rhyming scheme and creative adjectives.

Love your work.


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Review of Light of Night  
Review by BlueMoth
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love the repetition in 'light of night', both a paradox and descriptive phrase for the theme itself. Concise poem but it captures the spirit of the overall comfort of night. Would love to see a more rhyming scheme, but overall great job.

Keep writing!


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Review by BlueMoth
Rated: E | (4.0)
Quite a sweet poem especially for the season. Would love to see a longer, more descriptive version of it. But overall, a nice poem which is designed well for its purpose, and I would use it in my seasons greeting card if I were to send one.

Keep up the good work. :)


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