I loved your poem! It's great to show how much you care for someone, espeacially the "big" siblings. They couldn't stand you when you were younger, but as you grow, the relationship grows. And you show that that part of life is alive. I loved your diciton, but overall, it was a great poem. Sorry for your loss.
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