I like how the poem incorporates three different views throughout its entirety. The poem does a very good job of portraying the thoughts each of the types of person would have had. I felt that it did lack a little bit of imagery. And it seemed like you did try a little too hard to make everything rhyme.
I thought this poem was very well written! I liked how the seven things incorporated a large variety of aspects of life. I thought the symbolism was very good! The poem was deep and it made sense. It brought up some very good lifelong wonders. Very good piece of artwork
Well done I think a little above my head (I had to read it twice) but I like things I can't fully understand right off the bat that is one thing I wish I could do with my writing! Keep up the good art!
Nice I liked this one a lot! I like how it touches on the triality concept forming the idea that there is no such thing as good or evil and that many grey areas exist in between. A good way to portray the fact that really everything is left up to the perception of the beholder. I just had a discussion with a friend on this very concept. Well done thanks for recommending this one!
I liked the imagery the story was well done I thought it ended a little abruptly. However I liked how it was short and to the point but also painted a very good mental picture for the reader through the descriptiveness and imagery that was used
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