I have read your work "The storybook of life" and this is my review about it.
>It has a very good flow from one individual to how his/her storybook connects with the world.
>It's not in the paragraph form which I suggest you to do so.
>It seem to have a powerful point that "we are not alone" and I like that.
>All in all, I like the philosophy and point.
I can tell you I really like it a lot because it's so true and I also believe that the world is a big storybook.
Sometimes when we worry about our own personality, wishing we could be someone else, just think of the things that the other people don't have, that you actually have. We're all uniquely made for a purpose. Anyways, I've been through that feeling and I'm just saying my thoughts :) Nice poem, I like how emotional the flow is.
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