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Review of Bay of miracles  
Rated: E | (5.0)
(Sorry this took longer than I promised)

For your first attempt at poetry I thought it was written extreamly well. I really liked it and hope you continue to write poems
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Review of Dreaming of you  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Again a very good poem that expresses one feeling of waiting for love. just one thing, there's a space between the end of words and some exclimation points.
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Review of Sands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! I loved this poem. It was really cool. I thought what he said at the end was really sweet and kind. Good job. You really have a nack for poems.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good poem. I like the last part the best. However a few things came unclear to me. You said the vine will hold on to the person, then said but a vine needs to cling to something. Just made me wonder since it is already holding the person. The other part I don't get is that you opened the window to cool, are you cooling down the room, or you? But other than that you did good. Keep writing:)


(It may be obvious answers, I have concentrating problems, so I might not have goten it)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice job! You have a real nack for ryming! Even though the last two lines didnt ryme, it still kindof worked. Maybe you could try this if you want.

Let me tell you now why I can,
Im a total Mom fan!

That would work. So if she liked you, then who would she be regreting having? Any how good job!
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Review of Dead Heart  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting. I felt all those words were true. Eotions, all they bring you is pain and devestation. love, no more then the spur of the moment, you say you love onetime, then next time you see them/it, your so over that. good job,:} keep up now.
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Review of Day At The Zoo  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It was hilarious!
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