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Review of Evil's Fingers  
Review by Mystery
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked it, and you had a great idea and plotline and I love little Timmy :) but it's very hard to read. The grammar is alright but there is just to much paragraphs. (Don't worry, a lot of people had this problem) and sometimes the eyes need a little break, that's why other authors use your kind of paragraphs that are important or something. But when I looked at it, first glace it already made me tired to read. Other then that, I freaking love your story! Keep writing!
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Review of First Prayer  
Review by Mystery
Rated: E | (4.5)
its alright, i really liked it because it was peaceful...But and it fits perfectly for Christmas Eve for the holidays and pray. But its sad because of the slaves and i liked it how they prayed, which was nice....
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Review of Nightmare House  
Review by Mystery
Rated: E | (2.5)
not good spelling, but the characters and plot were okay.
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Review by Mystery
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
the story is beautiful!!!!
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