Vampires must be my subject of the day because they are everywhere. Anyway, I like the vampire love stories etc. That is why I stopped to read your take on this popular story.
This was very interesting and well written. A little short, but definitely to the point. I did not see any grammatical errors.
The character is solid, but I sense something beneath his/her monologue. This would be an excellent beginning to a much deeper story. Let me know if you happen to continue it.
Keep up the good work.
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