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Review by C.K.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I totally agree with it. I think it really gets the point across in a understandable and interesting way. I really like the fluency it helps in following all you have to say. It is very well written, I hope to read more work of yours. Keep up the good work.
C.K.
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Review by C.K.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I really like the way you started, some of what I read starts off boring but I found myself enjoying the little bits of humor you displayed in the start of the story. The beginning really sets in the character's traits, this shows a good amount of information on the character which makes it easier to picture all this happening. When the author introduces a character it helps the reader follow on what is going on in the book. On the very first sentence though, where you said my names Charlie, I don't know if it was purposeful but I am pretty sure it would be name's Charlie. It would be that because you are saying in the elongated form, my name is. I really think if you keep writing, this could someday be a great book. I am intrigued and hope to read the rest when you finish it. Keep up the good work.
C.K.
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