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Review by rancho
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dario,

I really like your poem. It seems to reflect a bit of my own character too.

Your character seems to miss a lady who once tried to make friends but at that time he was somehow looking the other way.

Great!
Best regards

Rancho
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Review by rancho
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, whome, your poem is lovely. However, why not expand on it? It is optimistic, and I get a feeling of being close to an actual sea.
Why not give it a try and make it an epic?

Yours
Rancho.
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