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Review of Birthday Party  
Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very astounding! The most impressive aspect of this piece is the description of the setting and characters. Everything from how people act and smell as well as the thoughts the protagonist has at the events corresponding with the party and all the memories.
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Review by creator9
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very expressive and wholesome. The words flow together and connect with the audience and make them understand why it's so astounding. The use of armor helps symbolize the emotional and mental state of the ones who are having troubles and need to fight it.
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Review by creator9
Rated: E | (5.0)
While the first instinct to go to when picking a tour for a story would be to look at the genre. A fantasy series has a title that gives off mystic vibes about the plot. However with a more dramatic story the title would have some type of subtext such "Bond" or "Believe".
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Review of Creature Instinct  
Review by creator9
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very humongous amount of suspense from the beginning to the end of the piece. The continuing thoughts of there being a creature that causes paranoia and keeps the instincts high for fear of falling victim. It sets a relation people have had with their fears.
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Review of The Light of Day  
Review by creator9
Rated: E | (3.5)
The words allow the audience to feel the emotion and weight within the protagonist's mind as well as let us visualize the setting and time in the story and have the images progress in our minds to continue and prepare for the next. The ending allows for suspension
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Review of Mother Nature  
Review by creator9
Rated: E | (4.5)
Even with only a little more then sixty words you still made this piece come forward and shine brilliantly.the nature is described in detail from the scenery to the sense of the reader of all the nature forces falling upon them.the end is also beautiful with passing comes a connection.
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Review of Giant Hot Guys  
Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great interactive, one of the best size interactive story out on the website. Each chapter has a extensive amount of content for each chapter and there a abundance of chapters in this interactive. each chapter is written good keeping the reader in the story
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Review of Why, It's Us!  
Review by creator9
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very compelling story that very well describes the human spirit as while it can be kind and pure it can be easily corrupted and lead to things the total opposite that originally made the human soul pure and generous and instead foul and very greedy.
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Review of Stars  
Review by creator9
Rated: E | (3.0)
Although a short poem it sents the message a long way giving it all in one full swoooooop! All with the goals of our dreams being represented as "Touching the stars" and even adding the heaven line made it seem like not even god can stop my dreams .
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Review by creator9
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very elaborate and we'll constructed,being one of the best set up polls I've seen on this website. Most polls I've seen are either without many options or are not written out well seeming very nonsensical. While this poll has very on point choices to pick.
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Review by creator9
Rated: E | (4.0)
A great poem with very authentic human emotion all in the perspective of a dream and leading the morale of children being the future and our insight to the future seeing if it's going to be greatness or of negativity. All wrote in a elaborate way to the reader.
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Review of Bloomsday  
Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Although there are a lot of transformation stories on the website this seems to be one of the most well kept and well written and the different options to choose the cause of transformation lead to many chapters that I'm sure more will add chapters too.
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Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This interactive has really take off with over two thousands chapters and many different branches of stories. While I prefer male interactive shrinking this was very descriptied with writing and can apply to many members on the website looking for a good story.
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Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Just opening up the interactive I'm already with the multiple branches to write additions too. While I prefer a male interactive shrinking story this can satisfy others with this preference. Giving each characters does give insight on the chapter which can make expectations.
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Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Reading this story has been great and I often check back occasionally to see if any new chapters were added. I added the guardians of the galaxy chapters and hoped someone could add good chapters. I get writer's block when I want to add certain chapters. But great job with interactive.
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Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
All the chapters of tom nook have been great as they seem to capture his character in this situation perfectly as they left great scenarios for either choice.Its always entertaining to see these shrinking stories either with video games, cartoons or movies.
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Review by creator9
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
A wish story is a very interesting concept as it can lead to many good storylines which can lead to good additions to the story.as for this chapter it does a good job at setting up the storyline presented with the character unknownly eating the mushrooms.
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Review by creator9
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is very descriptied having emotion put into each line making it absolutely spectacular,with the message being driven home hard about returning and revisiting one's origins.The way it is written engrosses the reader into the story being told. A splendid job at writing.
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