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Review of Potholes  
Review by Crymsen
Rated: E | (4.5)
Although short, this is a sort-of opening story for me, because i have seen on tv and known people who are in these types of situations. The fact that he takes off at the end makes me wonder what happens next and where their adventures take them after that. I didn't know if you planned on a part two, but unless you'll have the same concrete story I'm not sure you should pursue it. Once again, very interesting. Thanks for the read.
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