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Review of Misfit  
Review by mike
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this story! You tell it well. For improvements, I would have a full stop after enthusiastic on the first line, then the word No followed by a full stop. There's a few sentences like that. But excuse me for nitpicking. This was a pleasure to read, and with a lovely surprise ending! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Finding Items To Read" 
Review by mike
Rated: E | (4.0)
I have just read DRAGON'S HEART by Martin Gallagher. This fantasy novel takes us to a world inhabited by Dragons and humans. Naturally there is conflict, and there's plenty of that in Martin's world. I found the plot most interesting, highly imaginative, and with an even more surprising ending! There is also a lovely romance between a certain dragon and a human. A little bit of over writing here and there. But what the heck. If this is Martin's first novel, then the sequel-- and I do hope there's a sequel-- will iron out these little nuisances. Teenagers and young adults alike would adore this novel. Even aged adults like myself.
It would have helped if the author had supplied a map showing the many towns and mountain ranges that are mentioned throughout the book. All in all a fine read. Not to be ignored.
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