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Review of Levitations  
Review by Danfer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My first impression: an uplifting poem to persuade people to rise above the trifles and turbulances of life.

My favorite lines: O, my sons, the world steals souls even at sunrise.

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Review by Danfer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very touching story and detail descriptions, haven't been to a funeral for quite a few years but your choice of words set the tone and quickly brings us in the scene. Thank you very much.
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Review by Danfer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Once upon a time there was an education system in the east. Everyday,people read and recited the teachings and analects of the saint Confucious. If they did well academically they could work for the king and serve the country, and make a fortune and leave a legacy of course. One day,a primary school teacher who later became the chairman of the country decided to dump Confucious's theory, he believed the more learned people were, the more difficult it was to govern them. Because of that, he burned many old books and dismantled many Confucious Temples. Until finally,people took pride in their iliteracy and ignorance and tortured those who were well educated and threw them im prisons.
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