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Review of Poem Set #3  
Review by D-babii
Rated: E | (4.0)
The first poem was very interesting. I enjoy reading poetry and this was great to review :) I liked the second one a lot! Made me chuckle lol. I imagined the whole scenario while reading it. Lol a centipede. Eww I hate bugs lol

Keep it up and write more. I enjoy reading them


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Review of Busy  
Review by D-babii
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like how you format your poem. All words pushed together really makes it different. I have never seen a piece like this before.

On this line: PLEASE STOP AND LISTEN YOU”RE
YOU"RE should be revised into YOU'RE

But besides that grammar error I find this piece interesting. Write more and Welcome :)


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Review by D-babii
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow! Just speechless. This poem is awesome. I love the details. I can imagine her beauty and the description is just stunning. I love the line 'You see her black cherry roundness,her precious salmon lips and forget that she pumps with blood.'

It gives me chills reading that ling and it amazes me how descriptive you are. Keep it up :)


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Review of Party Platter  
Review by D-babii
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I loved how you used very descriptive words and it made me imagine every thing I read. I loved it. Made me chuckle and I would love to see more of your work. I would love to ask if you can review my work if possible.

Keep up the good poems and write more like this!! Loved it!! :)


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Review of Getting By  
Review by D-babii
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great job!!! Loved how you opened the story with Elle and her struggle. It reminds me of my struggle in life with my daughter. I know how it feels. I love how descriptive you are and the usage of your words are just amazing! I am really interested and want to read more. Hope to review some more of your work. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep it up:)

If you get a chance I would like you to review my recent short story.

Have a good day :)


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