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Review of Deeper  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Been there, seen there...came close to done that. A gripping read..I hope your better.
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Review of Just be  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, loved this.
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Review of Time  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (4.0)
Like this one Tracy, very good.
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Review of I am a ship  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (4.0)
Brilliant Tracey, really enjoyed this peice short and sweet babe
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Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is very good and flows well, really well written good wording and depth.

I enjoyed this a lot

Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Bad Kisser  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very very good, I really enjoyed this my poems so far are really quite short as a newbie I quess I have a lot to learn, could you please run your eye over mine as I would really like your views.


Many thanks

Regards

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Review of Words to say  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (4.0)
I have read through all your poems now and really like them, keep up the good work hope you stick around and the artistic juices keep flowing.
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Review of Broken  
Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome to writing.com I am also new, I really enjoyed your poem very good work.
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Review by Deadlegend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I guess the beautiful thing about poetry is that each person who reads them takes away something different, or gets a different picture or image or meaning to the words.

This poem made me sad, A life where love has died and the writer has become lost, depressed and desperate I really like the last 4 lines.

Almost often saying honey, don't

I must stop this; enough with sadness.

Deadly little red pills no more,
I will fly away... a new life soar.

this gave me the vision of someone tormented with the one she loves, tormented because he has found a fondness for his fists and although way more subtle than my November rain effort I believe she takes her own life to this way ending her pain and flying off to a better life.

Thanks for this it gave me much to ponder.

Your Friend

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