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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (2.5)
Put me in upgraded and charge me whatever. dean
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (2.5)
How do I delete one of my stories? I asked before but forgot. I can never find it. dean
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (2.5)
how do I edit my story? dean
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Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
How do I edit my story? dean
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Review of What A Girl Needs  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.5)
That was interesting and it lead me to think it was for her baby, not animals. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.0)
That was nice for just a small "saying" You said, ...belong to nobodyddd", should be, "belong to anybody" dean
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Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I assume this is to be continued. If so, you might want to say, "to be continued" Quite good for a start. It is my own liking, but I like to see more breakup of the sentences. Good luck. dean
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Review of The Girl  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was very good. You wrote that well and I feel with it. dean
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Review of Vikki  
Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
That was interesting. In the third sentence, the first word should be capitalized and the word 'form' should be 'from' the king bed should be 'king-size' These are small errors easy to fix. Keep writing. dean
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Review of An Encounter  
Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Thati is an interesting format. Nice writing. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.0)
I hope you will have other themes. dean
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Review of A Sweet Surprise  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.5)
that was a nice story of animals. I love dogs too, along with cats. I saw a few punctuation errors, easy to fix, like; Dot's, we'll, it's. I'm new at writing so I'm no expert. Keep on writing. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
very, very good. I enjoyed it and you used good and meaningful words, adjectives etc. Nice wiriting and I agree with you on your thoughts of women. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
That was very good. I enjoyed all the adjectives describing her. Nice work. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
that is very helpful. great tips. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: E | (4.5)
very helpful... you make some good points. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
on Guidelies for Reviews, it is very helpful and I liked the template. Dean
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Review of The Tenant of 306  
Review by dean
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Good story! I usually don't care for murder stories but you did a good job. Your grammer seems correct and sentences are well structured and interesting. I was a little confused in some places... i may have to read it a second time. I think you researced it well too. dean
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Review by dean
Rated: E | (2.0)
will someone please tell me how to get in contact with writers.com. I paid for more GPs over a month ago and no answer. dean.
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Review of The Last Truth  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.5)
very good, though I know little about poetry.
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Review by dean
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
interesting... I believe passports is one word
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Review of Oh Marshmallow  
Review by dean
Rated: E | (3.0)
good....quite original.. keep it up. Dean
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Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I sympathize with you as I have been through it.... I'm over 70. Nice writing. dean.
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Review of Universe of Dark  
Review by dean
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Your writing has a nice tone to it....I liked it. Very sad but thoughtful. Dean.(I just joined this writing "club")
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